请问我如果把雅思作文写成新概念3册41-60那样的形式能的多少分?7分?比如46课So great is our passion for doing things for ourselves,that we are becoming increasingly less dependent on specialized labour.No one can plead ignora

请问我如果把雅思作文写成新概念3册41-60那样的形式能的多少分?7分?比如46课So great is our passion for doing things for ourselves,that we are becoming increasingly less dependent on specialized labour.No one can plead ignora
请问我如果把雅思作文写成新概念3册41-60那样的形式能的多少分?7分?
比如46课So great is our passion for doing things for ourselves,that we are becoming increasingly less dependent on specialized labour.No one can plead ignorance of a subject any longer,for these are countless do-it-yourself publications.Armed with the right tools and materials,newlyweds gaily embark on the task of decorating their own homes.Men,particularly,spend hours of their leisure time installing their own fireplaces,laying out their own gardens; building garages and making furniture.Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to build their own computers.Shops cater for the do-it-yourself craze not only by running special advisory services for novices,but by offering consumers bits and pieces which they can assemble at home.Such things provide an excellent outlet for pent up creative energy,but unfortunately not all of us are born handymen.
Some wives tend to believe that their husbands are infinitely resourceful and can fix anything.Even men who can hardly drive a nail in straight are supposed to be born electricians,carpenters,plumbers and mechanics.When lights fuse,furniture gets rickety,pipes get clogged,or vacuum cleaners fail to operate,some woman assume that their husbands will somehow put things right.The worst thing about the do-it-yourself game is that sometimes even men live under the delusion that they can do anything,even when they have repeatedly been proved wrong.It is a question of pride as much as anything else.

请问我如果把雅思作文写成新概念3册41-60那样的形式能的多少分?7分?比如46课So great is our passion for doing things for ourselves,that we are becoming increasingly less dependent on specialized labour.No one can plead ignora
其实新概念上的那些议论文并没有特别标准,这篇还算是稍微标准一些的,还有业余爱好那一篇以及交通工具那一篇,还有第四册上的噪音效应的那一篇,其它的都不是很标准,你还是应该以雅思的范文为标准,学习新概念上面的好句子就好了,因为教材上的选文还要考虑到语言以及记叙文的语言,并不纯粹

模仿教材可能有点抄袭的嫌疑吧？

小小的路过一下，你还是挺超前的，佩服佩服，不知道能不能赶上你呢？谢谢你的回答