修改英文文章 如题 把思路整理一下 修改一下语法错误Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.Early during the Spring and Autumn period,2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was first determined as

修改英文文章 如题 把思路整理一下 修改一下语法错误Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.Early during the Spring and Autumn period,2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was first determined as
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Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.
Early during the Spring and Autumn period,2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was first determined as the Chinese traditional solar term among the total 24 terms.In Gregorian calendar,it is around Dec 22nd or 23rd.
As far as in the Spring and Autumn Period 2,500 years ago,Chinese people adopted the methods of tugui to measure the shadow of the sun for determining the twenty-four solar terms.Among them,the winter solstice is the first to be fixed,roughly around 22-23 December in the lunar calendar.
Midwinter day is the very day in North hemisphere with the shortest day and longest night year-round.After it,daytime will become increasingly longer and the coldest clime will invade all the places on the Northern part of the globe.We Chinese always call it "JinJiu",which means once Winter solstice comes,we will meet the coldest time ahead.
This celebration can be traced to the Chinese belief in yin and yang,which represent balance and harmony in life.It is believed that the yin qualities of darkness and cold are at their most powerful at this time,but it is also the turning point,giving way to the light and warmth of yang.For this reason,the Dong Zhi Festival is a time for optimism.
Ancient china did pay great attention to this holiday,regarding it as a big event.There was the saying that "Winter solstice holiday is greater than the spring festival".Nowadays,many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday.
The coming of winter is celebrated by families and is traditionally the time when farmers and fishermen gather food in preparation for the coming cold season.It is also a time for family reunions.
Northerners may have dumplings and raviolis that day while southerners may have rice and long noodles.Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.
Dong Zhi is celebrated in style.The longest night of the year is a time to put on brand new clothes,visit family with gifts and to laugh and drink deep into the long night.
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修改英文文章 如题 把思路整理一下 修改一下语法错误Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.Early during the Spring and Autumn period,2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was first determined as
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Northerners may have #Chinese# dumplings and raviolis that day while southerners may have rice and long noodles. Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.
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