麻烦帮我看一下语法错误1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive read

麻烦帮我看一下语法错误1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive read
麻烦帮我看一下语法错误
1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive reading and listening, rarely also have other courses such as writing.
2.The other teachers consider that postgraduate is high level talents, their independent learning ability is stronger, there is not necessary to force students to go to class, so the postgraduates' English course should be selective.
3.Moreover, the teacher's teaching method is single, they generally use the traditional teaching method, which the teacher is centered in class, reading and translation teaching is the main line, books and the blackboard are medium.
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麻烦帮我看一下语法错误1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive read
1.class 和 curriculum 是近义字,二选一以免拖沓;单调==>dull/monotonous,过时outmoded;最後一句需补字
The type of postgraduate public English curriculum is similar to the undergraduate one.This kind of curriculum design is dull and outmoded.Moreover,many schools generally only open the intensive reading and listening courses.Other courses such as writing are rare.
2.前 postgraduate is high talents 後their是明显的文法不一致错误;後面句子须补字;attend一词代go to使文体简洁;postgraduate 可作形容词,不用's;最後补上连接词理顺句子逻辑
The other teachers consider the postgraduates as high level talents whose self-learning ability is stronger.Therefore,it is not necessary to force students to attend classes.Thus,the postgraduate English course should be selective.
3.single又来了~别告诉我你单身太久了==>dull/monotonous...首句teacher's可删去搬动:都说教学方式了有必要强调"老师的"吗?...main line==>请改用major contents..下次写读後感有皇室血统或小说主线才用mainline...
Moreover,the teaching method is monotonous.The teachers generally use the traditional teaching method,which the teacher is centered,books and blackboard are medium,and reading as well as translation teachings are the major contents.

最大的问题叫做run-on sentences。例如第一句，其实是四个小句，没有任何连词、关系代词等将它们连接起来，就是摆在一起组成一句话，这就完全不符合英语语法。可以改成简单句、或者复合句。请看下面我试着给你把第一句话改了，
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最大的问题叫做run-on sentences。例如第一句，其实是四个小句，没有任何连词、关系代词等将它们连接起来，就是摆在一起组成一句话，这就完全不符合英语语法。可以改成简单句、或者复合句。请看下面我试着给你把第一句话改了，
Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to that of undergraduate college English, whose design is simple and backward. What's more, many schools generally only open intensive reading and listening, but rarely have other courses such as writing.

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读了一遍，我也没看出来呀！