英语人士帮忙看一下有没有语法等方面的错误语法,词汇之类的错误帮忙看一下,另外,哪些地方可以改进的更好一些的?我今年开学高2,这是自己写的!The second term of Senior High One is over ,I have improv

英语人士帮忙看一下有没有语法等方面的错误语法,词汇之类的错误帮忙看一下,另外,哪些地方可以改进的更好一些的?我今年开学高2,这是自己写的!The second term of Senior High One is over ,I have improv
英语人士帮忙看一下有没有语法等方面的错误
语法,词汇之类的错误帮忙看一下,另外,哪些地方可以改进的更好一些的?我今年开学高2,这是自己写的!
The second term of Senior High One is over ,I have improve with my vocabulary ,and composition.
At the beginning of the term ,I try my best to learn English well ,for example:reading English books ,writing ,and so on .Beside ,on the class ,I listening carefully and taking notes Details .What’s more ,when I have some questions on grammers ,I usually ask my classmates for help .
Through I have made progress in vocabulary and reading ,I also can not be proud ,because I want to work harder on English .
I have learn more and more Knowledges about English ,well ,I think it is easy to learn if you work hard .I should keep on speaking ,reading…
In Senior High two l will spend more time on grammers ,so ,I will get good marks which can make me happy and make my parents feel satisfy .

英语人士帮忙看一下有没有语法等方面的错误语法,词汇之类的错误帮忙看一下,另外,哪些地方可以改进的更好一些的?我今年开学高2,这是自己写的!The second term of Senior High One is over ,I have improv
The second term of Senior High in Grade One is over ,I have improved my vocabulary ,and composition.
At the beginning of the term ,I tried my best to learn English well,for example:reading English books ,writing and so on .Besides ,in the class ,I listened carefully and took notes in detail .What’s more ,when I had some questions on grammers ,I usually asked my classmates for help .
Though I have made progress in vocabulary and reading ,I can not be proud ,because I want to work harder on English .
I have learn more and more Knowledge about English ,well ,I think it is easy to learn if you work hard .I should keep on speaking ,reading…
In my second year,l will spend more time on grammers so I will get good marks which can make me happy and make my parents feel satisfied .
上面是改好的啦!……话说……建议楼主注意一下时态.以后写作文的时候,一般现在时,过去时,这些小时态对动词的处理一定要注意,否则作文要扣很多分的哦!加油!

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