请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!Dear Sir/Madam:My name is Wang manman.I am a student graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .Be honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you.When I am going into the society,for exp

请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!Dear Sir/Madam:My name is Wang manman.I am a student graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .Be honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you.When I am going into the society,for exp
请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!
Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Wang manman.I am a student graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .Be honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you.When I am going into the society,for exploiting my talents better,so I recommend myself to leads.
I am a graduate student that graduated from Beijing Unit University.The major is the Art Design (costume design direction),the main contents of professional study are the basics of painting,the composing of flat surface,color,stereoscopic and handicrafts,painting foundation,composing,beat plank,design of various clothing and various graphics software’s study.This makes me get various technical abilities of clothing professional.
During the period of my university I attended various activities of school and society actively.I have very well enough organization ability to adjust harmoniously.I am a career – minded man and I am full with sense of responsibility .I can face any difficulty and challenge.
I will give my resume to you with the letter.If there is an opportunity for me to talk personally with you,I will thank a lot.

请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!Dear Sir/Madam:My name is Wang manman.I am a student graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .Be honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you.When I am going into the society,for exp
Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Wang manman.I graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .I am honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you.(When I am going into the society,for exploiting my talents better,so I recommend myself to leads.)这个地方没看明白,
(I am a graduate student that graduated from Beijing Unit University.可以不要这句) My major is the Art Design (costume design direction),the main contents of professional study are the basics of painting,the composing of flat surface,color,stereoscopic and handicrafts,painting foundation,composing,beat plank,design of various clothing and various graphics software’s study.The professional study makes me get various technical abilities on clothing professional.
During my college life,I attended various activities of school and society.I have very well enough organization ability to adjust harmoniously.I am a career – minded man and I am full with sense of responsibility .I can work under great pressure.
I will give my resume to you with the letter.If there is an opportunity for me to talk personally with you,I will thank a lot.
帮你改了几个地方,你自己再看看吧,写的还可以.