检查英语作文错误The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world.It began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago.My favorite Olympic projects is footballand swimming.I often play football with my friends.I like footba

检查英语作文错误The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world.It began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago.My favorite Olympic projects is footballand swimming.I often play football with my friends.I like footba
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The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world.It began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago.
My favorite Olympic projects is footballand swimming.I often play football with my friends.I like football because it is exciting .I like swimming.it makes me taller and stronger,swimming can keep me fit.
The Olympics spirit is Faster,Higher and Stronger
The 2008 Olympic Games in Bejing will be held successfully.
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检查英语作文错误The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world.It began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago.My favorite Olympic projects is footballand swimming.I often play football with my friends.I like footba
My favorite Olympic projects is 应改为My favorite Olympic events are
比赛项目是event
另外 下面应改为
It makes me taller and stronger.Also,swimming can keep me fit.
The Olympic spirit is swifter,Higher and Stronger.

My favorite Olympic projects is中的"is"改成 are

projects该成project

1. city-cities
2. projects-project
整体感觉条理不是特别清楚,不会得到太高的分数.

My favorite Olympic projects 应该是
My favorite game is..
还有几个问题，我这样把官方公正的列出来，你自己按写作水平分吧
关于中文的奥匹精神The Olympic Motto is "Citius, Altius, Fortius", a Latin phrase meaning "Swifter, Higher, Stro...

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My favorite Olympic projects 应该是
My favorite game is..
还有几个问题，我这样把官方公正的列出来，你自己按写作水平分吧
关于中文的奥匹精神The Olympic Motto is "Citius, Altius, Fortius", a Latin phrase meaning "Swifter, Higher, Stronger". Coubertin's ideals are probably best illustrated by the Olympic Creed
还有你对olympic games的理解，你注意看Olympic Games都是开头大写，指奥运会，不是复数~~~~
The Olympic Games is an international multi-sport event subdivided into summer and winter sporting events. The summer and winter games are each held every four years (an Olympiad[2]). Until 1992, they were both held in the same year. Since then, they have been separated by a two year gap.
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Despite the Olympics usually being associated with one host city, most of the Olympics have had events held in other cities, especially the football and sailing events. There were two Olympics where some events were held in a different country: during the 1920 Antwerp Olympics two sailing races were held in the Netherlands; and during the 1956 Melbourne Olympics equestrian events were held in Sweden. The 2008 Beijing Olympics will mark the third time that Olympic events will have been held in the territories of two different NOC's: at the 2008 Olympics, equestrian events will be held in Hong Kong (which competes separately from mainland China.)
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1st sentence: are 改为 is, Olympic Games 其实是一个单数名词，那么接着那么名词一会要是个单数动词(is).不要被games误导哦！
1 st sentence: in 改为 around.（It just sounds better with around. -- around the world, or throughout the world.)<...

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1st sentence: are 改为 is, Olympic Games 其实是一个单数名词，那么接着那么名词一会要是个单数动词(is).不要被games误导哦！
1 st sentence: in 改为 around.（It just sounds better with around. -- around the world, or throughout the world.)
2nd sentence (语法）：It b
3rd sentence: Olympic projects?? 不知道是什么意思，但可以说成 Olympic events,那么既然你说的projects是双数那么接下来的是 are 不是 is . My favorite Olympic events are....
3rd sentence：打错了 footballland 改为 football and
你是说橄榄球吧？足球=soccer
sentence # 5-7，看看你需要做什么，格式的问题。
sentence # 7, 有点问题，我懂你的意思，但是你这样说不对。
It keeps me in good shape.
sentence # 8: Olympics 改为 Olympic,其实我看不太懂你最后两句说什么，也不可以这样说啦，语法很不通，可以考虑改为
Faster, Higher，and Stronger are the spirits of Olympic 2008.
The upcoming 2008 Olympic Games, which will hold in Beijing, China, will definitely kick off a great start.

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