我刚自学半个多月,很多地方不会表达,希望大家别见笑!July 13th,2010It’s day 12 for me study English.I study for long every day.it’s so tried.But,“no pains,no gains”It’s very interesting to learn English,I believe I will l

我刚自学半个多月,很多地方不会表达,希望大家别见笑!July 13th,2010It’s day 12 for me study English.I study for long every day.it’s so tried.But,“no pains,no gains”It’s very interesting to learn English,I believe I will l
我刚自学半个多月,很多地方不会表达,希望大家别见笑!
July 13th,2010
It’s day 12 for me study English.
I study for long every day.it’s so tried.But,“no pains,no gains”
It’s very interesting to learn English,I believe I will love it and and I will to learn it well.Com on!
July 14th,2010
Today,let me tell something about of my hometown and I.
That is a as pretty as a pictuer place in my heart.
There is a lake in front of my home,peoples call it “Hongfeng lake”.The water of lake aways clear and you can see some fish in the water.Threr are some trees and hills around the lake.
In the morning,you can see some baots in the likeside and the fihs full of boats.those are fishermen wokes hard one of night to gains.
Children are go to school so eraly every day,they usually on foot.In the morning,the birds are singing in the tree.you will love it.
I was born this place,my childhood is not rich.But I am very happiness.At that time,I aways worriless.I am longing for grow up every day.“When I am a big man,I was make much money.”I think.So,let me tell a secret for you,in truth,my dream is not make much money,it’s go to college.HA!

我刚自学半个多月,很多地方不会表达,希望大家别见笑!July 13th,2010It’s day 12 for me study English.I study for long every day.it’s so tried.But,“no pains,no gains”It’s very interesting to learn English,I believe I will l
July 13th,2010
It’s the twelfth day for me to learn English.
I learn English for a long time every day.I am very tried.However,“no pains,no gains”
It’s very interesting to learn English,I believe I will love it and and I will learn it well. Com on!
July 14th,2010
Today,let me tell you something about my hometown and I.
That is as pretty a place as a pictue in my heart.
There is a lake in front of my house,people call it “Hongfeng lake”.The water of the lake is always clear and you can see some fish in the water.There are some trees and hills around the lake.
In the morning,you can see some boats in the lakeside and the fishes are filled in the boats.those are fishmen wokes hard one of night to gains.
Children are go to school early everyday,they are usually on foot. In the morning,the birds are singing in the tree.you will love it.
I was born in this place,my childhood is not rich.But I am very happy.At that time,I am always worriless.I am longing for growing up everyday.“When I am a big man,I will make much money.”I think.So,let me tell a secret to you,in truth,my dream is not make much money,it’s that I want to go to college.HA!

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