我刚开始学了没几天,自学的,写的比较少,说是英语日记,其实就是几句话,请大家千万别笑话!July 11th,2010Today is Sunday,it’s rained all day.I was studying English all day and watch TV in the evening.This week,i was stu

我刚开始学了没几天,自学的,写的比较少,说是英语日记,其实就是几句话,请大家千万别笑话!July 11th,2010Today is Sunday,it’s rained all day.I was studying English all day and watch TV in the evening.This week,i was stu
我刚开始学了没几天,自学的,写的比较少,说是英语日记,其实就是几句话,请大家千万别笑话!
July 11th,2010
Today is Sunday,it’s rained all day.I was studying English all day and watch TV in the evening.
This week,i was study lesson1-lesson50 of the new concept English.At first,it’s very easy,but,later it’s not easy.It's so difficult for me to study.But,I can’t never drop it.I believe i can do it.

我刚开始学了没几天,自学的,写的比较少,说是英语日记,其实就是几句话,请大家千万别笑话!July 11th,2010Today is Sunday,it’s rained all day.I was studying English all day and watch TV in the evening.This week,i was stu
Today is Sunday,it’s rained all day.I have been studying English all day and watched TV in the evening.
This week i studied lesson1-lesson50 of the new concept English.At first,it’s very easy,but later it’s not so easy.It's so difficult for me to go on.But I must not drop it.I believe i can do it.
注意过去时态的用法,不要动不动就was did
注意标点用法,不必要的逗号不要用.
加油~

IT has been raining all day.I studied English and watched TV in the evening.
I have studied lesson1 -lesson50 of the new concept English this week.
At the begining,it was very easy.But later it was not easy.Now it is too difficult for me to study.However,I would never drop it.
You can do it!Keep holding on!

有一些错误，先修改如下：
July 11,Sunday
It rained all day.I was studying English all day( the whole day) and watched TV in the evening.
This week,i studied lesson1-lesson50 of the New Concept Engli...

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有一些错误，先修改如下：
July 11,Sunday
It rained all day.I was studying English all day( the whole day) and watched TV in the evening.
This week,i studied lesson1-lesson50 of the New Concept English.At first,it was very easy,but later, it was not easy. It's so difficult for me to learn it.But I'll never give it up.. I believe i can do it better and better.
如有不清楚的地方，可以提出来。

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