请帮我看一下这句英语对不对These days I am keeping a bit busy with marketing tour as already told to you that we are expanding our marketing network and I am on tour for appointment of distributors/dealer etc

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请帮我看一下这句英语对不对These days I am keeping a bit busy with marketing tour as already told to you that we are expanding our marketing network and I am on tour for appointment of distributors/dealer etc
请帮我看一下这句英语对不对
These days I am keeping a bit busy with marketing tour as already told to you that we are expanding our marketing network and I am on tour for appointment of distributors/dealer etc

请帮我看一下这句英语对不对These days I am keeping a bit busy with marketing tour as already told to you that we are expanding our marketing network and I am on tour for appointment of distributors/dealer etc
1.语法有些许错误,比如,
tell是及物动词,不可加介词,to应去掉
2.有些搭配有问题
3.长句并不一定是最好的,化为简单句并加上写标点 .
4.时态
下面这个只是参考：
As I told you,we planned to expand our marketing network.
THerefore,I am engaged in marketing tours recently and I am, for the moment, on the way to an appointment with dealers.

语法是正确的，就是有点太长了~~如果是作文的话，分开写再加上几个高级连接词会更好~~o(∩_∩)o...个人意见~仅供参考

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