一篇文章帮忙翻译（拒绝翻译器）The first attempt of even the most talented artists musicians and writers is seldom a masterpiece. If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals (彩排) or tryouts revising will seem a natural part of t

一篇文章帮忙翻译（拒绝翻译器）The first attempt of even the most talented artists musicians and writers is seldom a masterpiece. If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals (彩排) or tryouts revising will seem a natural part of t
一篇文章帮忙翻译（拒绝翻译器）
The first attempt of even the most talented artists musicians and writers is seldom a masterpiece. If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals (彩排) or tryouts revising will seem a natural part of the writing process .
What is the purpose of the dress rehearsals and the out-of-town previews that many Broadway shows go through? The answer is adding deleting replacing reordering in other words
revising. Andrew Lloyd Webber's musical Phantom of the Opera underwent such a process.
When Lloyd Webber began writing in 1984 he had in mind a funny exciting production. However when Phantom opened in London in 1986 the audience saw a moving psychological love story set to music. The musical had undergone several revisions due in part to problems with costuming and makeup (戏服和化妆). For instance Lloyd Webber rewrote some of the music because the Phantom's makeup prevented the actor from singing certain sounds.
When you revise you change aspects of your work in response to your evolving purpose or to include fresh ideas or newly discovered information.
Revision is not just an afterthought that gets only as much time as you have at the end of an assignment. Moreover it is a major stage of the writing process and writers revise every step of the way. Even your decision to switch topics while prewriting is a type of revising. However. don't make the mistake of skipping the revision stage that follows training
. Always make time to become your own audience and view your dress rehearsal so to speak. Reviewing your work in this way can give you valuable new ideas.
Revising involves mixing the effectiveness and appropriateness of all aspects of your writing making your purpose more clearly and refocusing or developing the facts and ideas you present. When you revise ask yourself the following questions keeping in mind the audience for whom you are writing: Is my main idea or purpose clear throughout my draft? Do I ever lose sight of my purpose? Have I given my readers all of the information that is facts opinions
inferences -- that they need in order to understand my main idea? Finally have I included too many unnecessary details that may confuse readers?

一篇文章帮忙翻译（拒绝翻译器）The first attempt of even the most talented artists musicians and writers is seldom a masterpiece. If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals (彩排) or tryouts revising will seem a natural part of t
哪怕是最著名的艺术家、音乐家和作家的第一次尝试都很少是一件杰作.如果你把你的草稿看作是彩排或是预演,那么不断地修改也就是写作过程中很自然的一部分.
许多百老汇的演出经历过的彩排和去外地的预演的目的是什么呢?答案就是尽量减少重新开始布置的次数,也就是修改.Andrew Lloyd Webber的歌剧幽灵就经受过这一过程.
当Lloyd Webber在1984年开始创作的时候,他脑海里有个很有趣很令人激动的作品.然而当歌剧幽灵1986年在伦敦开幕的时候,观众和着音乐观看了一部很感人的心灵上的爱情故事.由于某种程度上的在戏服和化妆方面的问题,这个音乐曾多次修改过.例如Lloyd Webber曾重写了一部分旋律就因为这个歌剧幽灵的化妆阻碍了演员演唱歌剧时候的某些发音.
当你修改的时候你改变了你作品中的很多地方去反映你的目的或者是去包含一些新的想法或是刚刚发现的信息.
修改不仅仅是你在任务的最后要做的事情.更多地,它是你写作过程中的主要阶段,并且坐着要在每一步都要进行修改.即使当你写作前的构思的时候打算改变题目,这也是一种修改.不管怎样,不要犯在训练过后就跳过修改阶段的这种错误.永远抽空去让你自己来当做自己的观众并且审视你自己的彩排.以这种方式来检查你自己的作品才能给你宝贵的新见解.
修改包括在你写作的所有方面将有效和正确的结合,修改能让你的目的更加明确并且使你所要表达的事实和想法更凝聚或者更能发展力.当你修改的时候问自己下列问题来要记住你必须要让观众知道你所写的：我的观点或者是目的在我的草稿中清晰地表达出来了吗?我是否漏掉了我写作的目的呢?我是否让读者了解到我的论点所要表达的信息了吗——他们为了了解我的主要思想所需要的信息.最后我是否包括了很多有可能使得读者困惑不清的内容呢?
这可是我自己翻译的哦 能力有限