favorive,my,this,movie,is,star(连词成句,注意大小写及标点符号）

favorive,my,this,movie,is,star(连词成句,注意大小写及标点符号） 请问谁能帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误原文：My favourite movie is transformer.This film was made in America.It used a lot of high-techs and computer special effects.I like it very much.This film has huge scenes and famous mov mov %ebp, mov eax, MOV K0 《This is my This is my 英语不错的帮我修改这篇文章好吗?Dear Mr Green,I see your factory CD(广告）,I very like the job,I'm a fourteen boy student.I'm outgoing ,and I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories ab this is my life my This is my This is my this?my name THIS is my this is my This is my this is my head my this family is This is my family This is my teacher